- The overlay shots of Pixie, dancing on the table, sitting on the floor and dancing were too close together losing some of her arms etc so we need to leave a bigger gap between the shots
- A shot of pixie dancing on her own
- A bigger cast so the idea of a house party looks more effective
- Laying on the sofa, original shot too obscure and needs too look more party like
- Mirror reverse shots
- Dancing in the line, look a bit fake, which will also be helped by a bigger cast
- Extreme close ups of pixie singing
- Writing on the face shot
- Vase smashing shot
- Alarm clock shot
- Getting up and walking out of the bedroom for continuity shot
- Spinning disco ball / light shot
- General party shots are needed to create more of a sense of a house party.
Hopefully these can all be obtained on the next shoot, we got loads done on the first shooting so i think we can.
good detail in isolating what shots you still need. great evidence on ongoing evaluation here. like the new banner too - very glitzy!
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